I’m working on finding a title for my (almost) true book. It’s a picture book about a gutsy woman in 1855. She wasn’t famous, and there isn’t a lot of solid documentary evidence about her life left. What I do have is all the documents about the big historical events she lived through and a story about her that her family has passed on generation to generation. It’s a story I really want to tell, so I’m venturing out of the world of straight nonfiction into historical fiction. The generalities of the story are historically accurate, but I’ve invented dialogue and taken the family legend as truth.

But I don’t want to mislead readers about what the book is and isn’t. Of course the back matter will explore what’s nonfiction and what isn’t, but I’m intrigued by picture books with titles that, while being amusing, also manage to warn the reader of authorial interventions into history.

Sometimes parentheses are used to comic effect:

Cover of Apples to Oregon shows a pioneer girl perched on a wagon filled with trees, being pulled by two oxen.

Apples to Oregon: Being the (Slightly) True Narrative of How a Brave Pioneer Father Brought Apples, Peaches, Pears, Plums, Grapes, and Cherries (and Children) Across the Plains by Deborah Hopkinson

Cover of Inky's Great Escape shows an octopus

Inky’s Great Escape: The Incredible (and Mostly True) Story of an Octopus Escape by Casey Lyall

Cover of book shows a rhinoceros.

Clara: The (Mostly) True Story of the Rhinoceros who Dazzled Kings, Inspired Artists, and Won the Hearts of Everyone While She Ate Her Way Up and Down a Continent by Emily Arnold McCully

For some reason–maybe because ballooning started in the 1700s and there aren’t a lot of primary source documents?–hot-air ballooning shows up often in these caveat-dotted titles.

Cover of book shows hot air balloon, sheep, rooster, and duck

Hot Air: The (Mostly) True Story of the First Hot-Air Balloon Ride by Marjorie Priceman

Cover of book shows hot air balloon over water. Two men are in basket under balloon.

A Voyage in the Clouds: The (Mostly) True Story of the First International Flight by Balloon in 1785 by Matthew Olshan

Other books keep the caveats right out in the open, not hidden inside parentheses.

Cover of book shows a boy and several animals swimming

Ben Franklin’s Big Splash: The Mostly True Story of His First Invention by Barb Rosenstock

Cover of book shows a young George Washington measuring himself against the trunk of a tree. A hatchet lies on the ground next to him.

George Washington’s Birthday: A Mostly True Tale by Margaret McNamara

Cover of book shows a woman making chocolate chip cookies with children around her.

How the Cookie Crumbled by Gilbert Ford examines different stories floating around and analyzes the likelihood that they’re true, teaching critical thinking in the process. And the full title sets the reader up for what’s happening inside the book: How the Cookie Crumbled: The True (and Not-So-True) Stories of the Invention of the Chocolate Chip Cookie.

As a reader, I love it when the title lets me know whether I’m launching into nonfiction or not. I wonder whether explicit titles like these help librarians who are trying to figure out how to shelve their books.

Still working on my upcoming title, but I’m pretty sure it will include some comment about the truth value of the story inside the covers!

Titles are tough. How do you condense everything you’ve poured into that manuscript to a few words? Words that need to intrigue and engage. Words that need to impel someone to pick up your book and open it. What makes a good title?

This question became more than idle speculation for me when my editor told me that she thought the title of my upcoming book was boring. I knew she was right, but I wasn’t sure how to come up with a better title.

On her blog, Darcy Pattison suggests strategies for brainstorming titles. Her list was a helpful starting place, but the titles I was coming up with still made me yawn. What, I wondered, makes a good nonfiction picture book title? Are there models I could use to figure out a title for my book?

Then the lightbulb went off. I use nonfiction picture books as models for narrative voice, for structure, for treatment of quotations…why not for titles?

I pulled out my reading journals, where I keep a record of the nonfiction picture books I read, and wrote down every title that I loved. (I discovered that I didn’t love every title!) I should have used sticky notes, but instead I ended up with a stack of strips of paper, each with a title I loved. Then I started sorting, trying to figure out broad categories of title types.

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I ended up with seven categories of titles I liked. Then I tried to write seven new titles for my book, one for each title category.

And I found a title that both my editor and I like (though it’s not quite time to reveal it).

My list was idiosyncratic–it reflected my taste and my likes–but the process would work for anyone. Reading journals to the rescue yet again!